gre argument163提綱分析匯總

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：社會

　　gre argument 163題目：

　　The following is taken from the editorial section of the local newspaper in Rockingham.

　　In order to save a considerable amount of money, Rockinghams century-old town hall should be torn down and replaced by the larger and more energy-efficient building that some citizens have proposed. The old town hall is too small to comfortably accommodate the number of people who are employed by the town. In addition, it is very costly to heat the old hall in winter and cool it in summer. The new, larger building would be more energy efficient, costing less per square foot to heat and cool than the old hall. Furthermore, it would be possible to rent out some of the space in the new building, thereby generating income for the town of Rockingham.

　　提綱：

　　The author fails to consider the cost of constructing the new building, thus the assumption that the construction will save a considerable amount of money is open to question.

　　The author fails to consider the negative effects of tearing down the old town hall.

　　Granted that a new hall is necessary, the necessity of tearing down the old one is unwarranted.

　　Other possible measures could also be taken to solve the problems with the old town hall.

　　The author fails to justify the assumption that the energy problems will automatically be solved once the new building is constructed.

　　The author fails to investigate if there are any individuals and institutions who are willing to rent the space in the new hall, and how much rent could we receive.

　　The author does not take into account the negative effects of renting out some of the space in the new hall.

　　注：題目中括號里的數字表明這句話體現的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據就是作文的邏輯性要強。

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：社會

　　gre argument 163題目：

　　The following is taken from the editorial section of the local newspaper in Rockingham.

　　In order to save a considerable amount of money, Rockinghams century-old town hall should be torn down and replaced by the larger and more energy-efficient building that some citizens have proposed. The old town hall is too small to comfortably accommodate the number of people who are employed by the town. In addition, it is very costly to heat the old hall in winter and cool it in summer. The new, larger building would be more energy efficient, costing less per square foot to heat and cool than the old hall. Furthermore, it would be possible to rent out some of the space in the new building, thereby generating income for the town of Rockingham.

　　提綱：

　　The author fails to consider the cost of constructing the new building, thus the assumption that the construction will save a considerable amount of money is open to question.

　　The author fails to consider the negative effects of tearing down the old town hall.

　　Granted that a new hall is necessary, the necessity of tearing down the old one is unwarranted.

　　Other possible measures could also be taken to solve the problems with the old town hall.

　　The author fails to justify the assumption that the energy problems will automatically be solved once the new building is constructed.

　　The author fails to investigate if there are any individuals and institutions who are willing to rent the space in the new hall, and how much rent could we receive.

　　The author does not take into account the negative effects of renting out some of the space in the new hall.

　　注：題目中括號里的數字表明這句話體現的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應該養成寫提綱的習慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據就是作文的邏輯性要強。