英語六級8分作文范文批改2

　　英語六級待批改作文：

　　Why is fast food is so popular in China? I have asked myself a lot of times.Actually it is not only so popular in China, but also all over the world.Everytime when I go to Mcdonalds,it is always full of people.

　　It is so prevailing in china,and I think the main reason is that fast food is so convenience for people working and living, especially popular in young people.For another, it is simply to worship things of foreign countries,I think. I really do not think that hamburger is more delicious than our chinese hamburger from Xian.

　　But on the other hand, A lot of chinese fast food restaurant is becoming more and more popular, so little by little, the junk food like hamburger will not be the only good choice for chinese people.

　　英語六級作文批改如下：

　　Why is(刪除) fast food is so popular in China? I have asked myself a lot of(改為several) times. Actually it is not only so popular in China, but also all over the world. Everytime(改為Every time) when I go to McDonalds, it is always full of people.

　　It is so prevailing in china, and I think the main reason is that fast food is so convenience for people working and living(刪除), especially popular in(改為among) young people. For another, it is simply to worship(改為 a kind of worship to) things of foreign countries, I think. I really do not think that hamburger is more delicious than our chinese(c要大寫) hamburger from Xian.

　　{But on the other hand, A(小寫) lot of chinese(同上)fast food restaurant is becoming more and more popular, so little by little, the junk food like hamburger will not be the only good choice for chinese(同上)people｝

　　同學你好，一個句子里面只能有一個謂語動詞，注意單詞的大小寫，標點符號與后面的單詞間空一格。另外，要仔細審題，題目第三段要寫你的個人看法，也就是你對于此現象的解決辦法。

　　英語六級待批改作文：

　　Why is fast food is so popular in China? I have asked myself a lot of times.Actually it is not only so popular in China, but also all over the world.Everytime when I go to Mcdonalds,it is always full of people.

　　It is so prevailing in china,and I think the main reason is that fast food is so convenience for people working and living, especially popular in young people.For another, it is simply to worship things of foreign countries,I think. I really do not think that hamburger is more delicious than our chinese hamburger from Xian.

　　But on the other hand, A lot of chinese fast food restaurant is becoming more and more popular, so little by little, the junk food like hamburger will not be the only good choice for chinese people.

　　英語六級作文批改如下：

　　Why is(刪除) fast food is so popular in China? I have asked myself a lot of(改為several) times. Actually it is not only so popular in China, but also all over the world. Everytime(改為Every time) when I go to McDonalds, it is always full of people.

　　It is so prevailing in china, and I think the main reason is that fast food is so convenience for people working and living(刪除), especially popular in(改為among) young people. For another, it is simply to worship(改為 a kind of worship to) things of foreign countries, I think. I really do not think that hamburger is more delicious than our chinese(c要大寫) hamburger from Xian.

　　{But on the other hand, A(小寫) lot of chinese(同上)fast food restaurant is becoming more and more popular, so little by little, the junk food like hamburger will not be the only good choice for chinese(同上)people｝

　　同學你好，一個句子里面只能有一個謂語動詞，注意單詞的大小寫，標點符號與后面的單詞間空一格。另外，要仔細審題，題目第三段要寫你的個人看法，也就是你對于此現象的解決辦法。