SAT寫作7個常見錯誤分析

　　SAT寫作考試的備考中，大家需要從很多方面進行著手，但是最基本的就是保證句子的詞匯應用的正確性。下面我們來看看這些常見的錯誤有哪些吧。

　　1. UAlthough we were opposed to the program, we thought that despite its bilateral support, it would accomplish a little.We opposed the program, despite its bilateral support, because we thought it would accomplish little.

　　點評：句子原意為盡管該計劃如何如何好，我們反對它，因為。。。。。。先弄清句意。表原因還是用更簡單的because。

　　2. The tomatoes at this fruit stand are Umuch more plump, fresh and tasty than the fruit stand located in the lobby of the buildingU in which I work. much more plump, fresh and tasty than those sold at the fruit stand located in the lobby of the building.

　　點評：這個句子中比較了多個項目。在多個比較中可以用much more/less adj+adj+adj+...的形式。

　　同時注意比較的對象。

　　3. While several baseball teams have tried to supplant the Yankees as the dominant team in baseball, Utheir inability has been unableU to win even half as many WS as the Yankees have won in the past one hundred years. they have been unable CUUS -- Chinese Undergraduates in the United States

　　點評：平行結構，時態，句式一致。CUUS -- Chinese Undergraduates in the United States

　　5. The U tiger, a relative of the B tiger, has been described as Uthe strongest tiger and also the most peaceful of them.U the strongest and yet the most peaceful of tigers.

　　點評：和前面一題類似。

　　6. The price of gold has been influenced by continued inflation and Ubecause people have lost faithU in the dollar. loss of faith

　　點評：平行結構。

　　7. UIf we compare the number of alligators with the Gila monsters over time, we see that the alligatorU is in decline. A comparison overtime of the numbers of alligators and Gila monsters shows that alligators are

　　點評：直接用comparison更簡潔。同時還是要注意比較的對象。數量必須和數量比。

　　SAT寫作考試的備考中，大家需要從很多方面進行著手，但是最基本的就是保證句子的詞匯應用的正確性。下面我們來看看這些常見的錯誤有哪些吧。

　　1. UAlthough we were opposed to the program, we thought that despite its bilateral support, it would accomplish a little.We opposed the program, despite its bilateral support, because we thought it would accomplish little.

　　點評：句子原意為盡管該計劃如何如何好，我們反對它，因為。。。。。。先弄清句意。表原因還是用更簡單的because。

　　2. The tomatoes at this fruit stand are Umuch more plump, fresh and tasty than the fruit stand located in the lobby of the buildingU in which I work. much more plump, fresh and tasty than those sold at the fruit stand located in the lobby of the building.

　　點評：這個句子中比較了多個項目。在多個比較中可以用much more/less adj+adj+adj+...的形式。

　　同時注意比較的對象。

　　3. While several baseball teams have tried to supplant the Yankees as the dominant team in baseball, Utheir inability has been unableU to win even half as many WS as the Yankees have won in the past one hundred years. they have been unable CUUS -- Chinese Undergraduates in the United States

　　點評：平行結構，時態，句式一致。CUUS -- Chinese Undergraduates in the United States

　　5. The U tiger, a relative of the B tiger, has been described as Uthe strongest tiger and also the most peaceful of them.U the strongest and yet the most peaceful of tigers.

　　點評：和前面一題類似。

　　6. The price of gold has been influenced by continued inflation and Ubecause people have lost faithU in the dollar. loss of faith

　　點評：平行結構。

　　7. UIf we compare the number of alligators with the Gila monsters over time, we see that the alligatorU is in decline. A comparison overtime of the numbers of alligators and Gila monsters shows that alligators are

　　點評：直接用comparison更簡潔。同時還是要注意比較的對象。數量必須和數量比。