2023年10月9日SAT寫作參考范文一
10月9日SAT作文成文 （范文一）
開頭段：三句話寫作法
1 觀點
I prefer adjusting ourselves to new circumstances to remaining unchanged.
2 解釋觀點=提煉例子中的為什么 （選擇式任務要體現(xiàn)出比較）
On some occasions, you have no way but to change yourself for new circumstances like cancer if you still have a dream yet to be realized. （改變的優(yōu)點）
On the contrary, if you refuse to gear yourself towards new circumstances, hardly can you survive, let alone realizing dreams.（不改變的缺點）
3 下文的結(jié)構(gòu)提示
The story of Lance Armstrong, an American cyclist who overcame a deadly cancer, could well exemplify my point.
中間段
目的：把已經(jīng)準備好的邏輯鏈條變成英文，注意兩點
1） 細節(jié)
2） 適時點題
第一步：曾經(jīng)的他
Raised in a single-parent family, Lance Armstrong lived with his mother for over 19 years until he found our his talent for cycling and decided to move out on his own so that he could join the American national cycling team under coach Chris Carmichael. However, he exhibited somewhat traits of a teenager who lacked parental love, such as rudeness and egoism. （點出曾經(jīng)的性格）
To be more specific, in 1990 Amateur World Championship in Japan, he ignored the suggestion of his coach Chris that he was supposed to save energy before the final charge. Actually, at that time, he quickly pedaled to a big lead in order to show up before all the competitors. However that charge consumed him too much energy. Finally, he finished eleventh. （點出這人不聽別人建議）
Whats worse, he didntt give his opponents any respect. Instead, he would shout at them and insult them during races. In response other riders sometimes got in his way on purpose and tried to slow him down. （點出這人很粗魯）
第二步 得了癌癥
However, unfortunately, he was almost sentenced to death by his doctor in 1996 when he informed Lance that he suffered from testicular cancer. At the beginning, he was unable to face the music since he was always so proud of his physique. But doctors warned him that if he kept on wasting time, it would be impossible to cure him.
第三步 決定改變態(tài)度 （重要過渡，點題部分）
In that case, he had a rethink about himself. For all these years, he had never got somewhere in the cycling field due to his unwillingness to cooperate with his coach and team members. This time if still kept unchanged, he might die later. Therefore, confronted with the new circumstance, namely, the fatal cancer, Lance Armstrong decided to change his attitudes towards others in order to overcome the disease and pedal his beloved bicycle once again. （點題，不改變就會死，所以只能改變自己適應新環(huán)境）
第四步 具體怎么適應新環(huán)境的
More specifically, he listened to the advice of his doctor, who encouraged him to undergo a surgery to remove one of his testicles. After a three-hour operation, he continued to take the chemotherapy. Painful though the therapy was, his body handled the drugs without too many side effects.
Whats more, he also strengthened his communication with his doctors. From time to time, Lance talked to his doctors about his treatment and hoped that they could use drugs that wouldnt destroy his muscles or hurt his chance of returning to cycling someday.
第五步 適應之后的結(jié)果
At last, after a treatment of over 1 year, Lance miraculously recovered and returned to the cycling field in 1998. More significant was the fact that he won seven straight victories in Tour-de-France, the World Cup in his field, which was greatly associated with his cooperation with the whole team.
總結(jié)（兩句話總結(jié)法）
1 總結(jié)例子
如果不是因為他愿意改變自己配合醫(yī)生的治療，他可能也不會戰(zhàn)勝病魔奪得冠軍。
Had Lance Armstrong fail to change himself and cooperate with his doctors, he might not have conquered the cancer and gained the champion.
2 重述觀點
因此我們確實需要改變態(tài)度適應惡劣的環(huán)境。
Therefore, it is necessary for us to adapt ourselves to new environment.
10月9日SAT作文成文 （范文一）
開頭段：三句話寫作法
1 觀點
I prefer adjusting ourselves to new circumstances to remaining unchanged.
2 解釋觀點=提煉例子中的為什么 （選擇式任務要體現(xiàn)出比較）
On some occasions, you have no way but to change yourself for new circumstances like cancer if you still have a dream yet to be realized. （改變的優(yōu)點）
On the contrary, if you refuse to gear yourself towards new circumstances, hardly can you survive, let alone realizing dreams.（不改變的缺點）
3 下文的結(jié)構(gòu)提示
The story of Lance Armstrong, an American cyclist who overcame a deadly cancer, could well exemplify my point.
中間段
目的：把已經(jīng)準備好的邏輯鏈條變成英文，注意兩點
1） 細節(jié)
2） 適時點題
第一步：曾經(jīng)的他
Raised in a single-parent family, Lance Armstrong lived with his mother for over 19 years until he found our his talent for cycling and decided to move out on his own so that he could join the American national cycling team under coach Chris Carmichael. However, he exhibited somewhat traits of a teenager who lacked parental love, such as rudeness and egoism. （點出曾經(jīng)的性格）
To be more specific, in 1990 Amateur World Championship in Japan, he ignored the suggestion of his coach Chris that he was supposed to save energy before the final charge. Actually, at that time, he quickly pedaled to a big lead in order to show up before all the competitors. However that charge consumed him too much energy. Finally, he finished eleventh. （點出這人不聽別人建議）
Whats worse, he didntt give his opponents any respect. Instead, he would shout at them and insult them during races. In response other riders sometimes got in his way on purpose and tried to slow him down. （點出這人很粗魯）
第二步 得了癌癥
However, unfortunately, he was almost sentenced to death by his doctor in 1996 when he informed Lance that he suffered from testicular cancer. At the beginning, he was unable to face the music since he was always so proud of his physique. But doctors warned him that if he kept on wasting time, it would be impossible to cure him.
第三步 決定改變態(tài)度 （重要過渡，點題部分）
In that case, he had a rethink about himself. For all these years, he had never got somewhere in the cycling field due to his unwillingness to cooperate with his coach and team members. This time if still kept unchanged, he might die later. Therefore, confronted with the new circumstance, namely, the fatal cancer, Lance Armstrong decided to change his attitudes towards others in order to overcome the disease and pedal his beloved bicycle once again. （點題，不改變就會死，所以只能改變自己適應新環(huán)境）
第四步 具體怎么適應新環(huán)境的
More specifically, he listened to the advice of his doctor, who encouraged him to undergo a surgery to remove one of his testicles. After a three-hour operation, he continued to take the chemotherapy. Painful though the therapy was, his body handled the drugs without too many side effects.
Whats more, he also strengthened his communication with his doctors. From time to time, Lance talked to his doctors about his treatment and hoped that they could use drugs that wouldnt destroy his muscles or hurt his chance of returning to cycling someday.
第五步 適應之后的結(jié)果
At last, after a treatment of over 1 year, Lance miraculously recovered and returned to the cycling field in 1998. More significant was the fact that he won seven straight victories in Tour-de-France, the World Cup in his field, which was greatly associated with his cooperation with the whole team.
總結(jié)（兩句話總結(jié)法）
1 總結(jié)例子
如果不是因為他愿意改變自己配合醫(yī)生的治療，他可能也不會戰(zhàn)勝病魔奪得冠軍。
Had Lance Armstrong fail to change himself and cooperate with his doctors, he might not have conquered the cancer and gained the champion.
2 重述觀點
因此我們確實需要改變態(tài)度適應惡劣的環(huán)境。
Therefore, it is necessary for us to adapt ourselves to new environment.
