雅思大作文論點分析：肉體和靈魂

　　肉體和靈魂

　　雅思大作文常會出一些有關科技發明或娛樂方式的利與弊話題。那么不管是寫好處還是壞處，考生應該從該發明或娛樂對人的肉體和靈魂這兩方面去組織自己的分支觀點。比如電腦對肉體的影響：

　　You dont have to be a scientist to see that, due to overuse of the computer, a lot of kids get little exercise, which makes them obese.

　　Another common disadvantage is that playing too much on the computer can cause bad eyesight.

　　發明或娛樂對肉體的影響主要表現在削弱勢力和增加肥胖兩個方面，而其對靈魂的影響則涉及一下多個方面。

　　1.高頻率的信息切換影響孩子們的耐性。

　　There is not deny in that with the advent of technology, our patience grows thin.

　　2.媒體中的暴力節目扭曲孩子們的靈魂。

　　Media violence affects children by: increasing aggressiveness and anti-social behavior; intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.

　　3.對媒體過多關注使孩子們變得孤僻而脫離現實生活。

　　For lack of face-to-face contact, modern children tend to be more introverted, unsocial, isolated and indifferent than those kids in last century.

　　肉體和靈魂

　　雅思大作文常會出一些有關科技發明或娛樂方式的利與弊話題。那么不管是寫好處還是壞處，考生應該從該發明或娛樂對人的肉體和靈魂這兩方面去組織自己的分支觀點。比如電腦對肉體的影響：

　　You dont have to be a scientist to see that, due to overuse of the computer, a lot of kids get little exercise, which makes them obese.

　　Another common disadvantage is that playing too much on the computer can cause bad eyesight.

　　發明或娛樂對肉體的影響主要表現在削弱勢力和增加肥胖兩個方面，而其對靈魂的影響則涉及一下多個方面。

　　1.高頻率的信息切換影響孩子們的耐性。

　　There is not deny in that with the advent of technology, our patience grows thin.

　　2.媒體中的暴力節目扭曲孩子們的靈魂。

　　Media violence affects children by: increasing aggressiveness and anti-social behavior; intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.

　　3.對媒體過多關注使孩子們變得孤僻而脫離現實生活。

　　For lack of face-to-face contact, modern children tend to be more introverted, unsocial, isolated and indifferent than those kids in last century.