2024屆高考英語寫作分類掌握復習課件：12 敘事經過類（新人教版）
* * 典例： 參觀清華大學(日記或游記)
[總述]Today we visited Qinghua University.
[過程] Early in the morning we arrived at the gate of Tsinghua University, where we were warmly welcomed by an old professor, who
then showed us around the campus.
晨讀狂背語篇模板
In the library, we saw some university students reading attentively in the reading rooms.
After that, we came to the lab building.
At the end of the visit, the old professor gave us a lecture on science in the afternoon, which interested us very much.
Time passed so quickly that
before we knew it, it was time that we had to say goodbye to the professor.
[結果] Since then, I have worked harder at my lessons than usual and made up my mind to be a student of Qinghua University. 一、篇章結構 總述 → 過程 → 感受
二、寫作技巧 敘述活動或事件的過程, 包括日記和游記。寫作時應注意以下幾點：
靈活運用超級模仿 1.一般應包括記敘文的六要素。如游記, 一般包括旅游的時間(when)、地點(where)、參加的人員(who)、交通工具(how)、所見所聞(what), 以及感受和體會(feeling)。
2.一般用過去時, 但也要靈活使用其它時態。如描寫景色或議論時, 可能用一般現在時; 表示個人感想, 打算或決心, 可能用一般將來時。 3.以時間或地點為線索, 描述事件或活動過程。表示時間的詞有:
one day, the next day, last Friday, (early) in the morning, (late) in the afternoon, at noon, upon arrival, at first, then, (shortly) after that, after a short while, after a short rest, afterwards, ten minutes later, soon, soon after, after, before, when, while, during, immediately, in the end, finally等。 三、句式模板 1. Today I paid a visit to ...with my classmates. 今天我和同學一起參觀了……
2.Time passed quickly before we knew it， we had to ... 時間不知不覺過去了, 我們不得不……
3.How glad/happy/excited I feel today! 今天我感到多么高興啊！ 四、超級仿寫 1. (2009北京)假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華，為響應綠化祖國的號召，你班4月12日去郊區植樹。活動過程如下圖所示:
［寫作內容］ 請根據以上四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇日記，記敘植樹活動的全過程。 參考詞匯: 郊區 suburbs April 12
Tuesday
Fine
［總述］Today is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience.
［過程］In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes, some were carrying and planting young trees, and others were watering them.
After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving, we took some photos to record our green action.
［感受］Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment. 2.(2008北京) 假設上周你們班舉行了春游活動，活動過程如下圖所示:
［寫作內容］請根據以上四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇短文，敘述上周你們班從準備春游到春游結束的完整過程。 提示詞: 游樂園amusement park
垃圾箱bin
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
［過程］The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.
However, when
we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
［感受］We were tired but happy.
* * 典例： 參觀清華大學(日記或游記)
[總述]Today we visited Qinghua University.
[過程] Early in the morning we arrived at the gate of Tsinghua University, where we were warmly welcomed by an old professor, who
then showed us around the campus.
晨讀狂背語篇模板
In the library, we saw some university students reading attentively in the reading rooms.
After that, we came to the lab building.
At the end of the visit, the old professor gave us a lecture on science in the afternoon, which interested us very much.
Time passed so quickly that
before we knew it, it was time that we had to say goodbye to the professor.
[結果] Since then, I have worked harder at my lessons than usual and made up my mind to be a student of Qinghua University. 一、篇章結構 總述 → 過程 → 感受
二、寫作技巧 敘述活動或事件的過程, 包括日記和游記。寫作時應注意以下幾點：
靈活運用超級模仿 1.一般應包括記敘文的六要素。如游記, 一般包括旅游的時間(when)、地點(where)、參加的人員(who)、交通工具(how)、所見所聞(what), 以及感受和體會(feeling)。
2.一般用過去時, 但也要靈活使用其它時態。如描寫景色或議論時, 可能用一般現在時; 表示個人感想, 打算或決心, 可能用一般將來時。 3.以時間或地點為線索, 描述事件或活動過程。表示時間的詞有:
one day, the next day, last Friday, (early) in the morning, (late) in the afternoon, at noon, upon arrival, at first, then, (shortly) after that, after a short while, after a short rest, afterwards, ten minutes later, soon, soon after, after, before, when, while, during, immediately, in the end, finally等。 三、句式模板 1. Today I paid a visit to ...with my classmates. 今天我和同學一起參觀了……
2.Time passed quickly before we knew it， we had to ... 時間不知不覺過去了, 我們不得不……
3.How glad/happy/excited I feel today! 今天我感到多么高興啊！ 四、超級仿寫 1. (2009北京)假設你是紅星中學高三（1）班的學生李華，為響應綠化祖國的號召，你班4月12日去郊區植樹。活動過程如下圖所示:
［寫作內容］ 請根據以上四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇日記，記敘植樹活動的全過程。 參考詞匯: 郊區 suburbs April 12
Tuesday
Fine
［總述］Today is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience.
［過程］In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes, some were carrying and planting young trees, and others were watering them.
After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving, we took some photos to record our green action.
［感受］Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment. 2.(2008北京) 假設上周你們班舉行了春游活動，活動過程如下圖所示:
［寫作內容］請根據以上四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇短文，敘述上周你們班從準備春游到春游結束的完整過程。 提示詞: 游樂園amusement park
垃圾箱bin
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
［過程］The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.
However, when
we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
［感受］We were tired but happy.
