2024屆高三英語(yǔ)百所名校好題速遞分項(xiàng)解析匯編（第01期）：專(zhuān)題05 短文改錯(cuò)（教師版）

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　　2024屆高考模擬試題分類(lèi)匯編（1）之短文改錯(cuò)

　　traffic flow. But the most important thing is what the number of private cars should be put under the control. Meanwhile, buses should have its own special routes which cannot be using by other vehicles. Therefore, underground train and city train should be developed quickly.

　　I do hope my suggestions will be taken.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　71.complaining后面加about

　　72.serious--seriously

　　73.advices--advice

　　74.other--another

　　75.that--which

　　76.what--that

　　77.under后面的the去掉

　　78.its--their

　　79.using--used

　　80.Therefore—Besides/Moreover

　　74.other—another

　　考查代詞。For another

　　75.that--which

　　考查定語(yǔ)從句；that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which可以引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；

　　76.what--that

　　考查表語(yǔ)從句；句意：但最重要的是事情是私家車(chē)的數(shù)量應(yīng)該得到控制；

　　77.under后面的the去掉

　　考查固定短語(yǔ)。Under control處在控制之下；

　　78.its--their

　　考查代詞。句意：同時(shí)，公交車(chē)有他們自己的專(zhuān)線，這是其它機(jī)動(dòng)車(chē)所不能使用的。

　　79.using--used

　　考查被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。Be used by 被。。使用；

　　80.Therefore—Besides/Moreover 考查副詞。除此之后，地鐵發(fā)展也很迅速；

　　考點(diǎn) 短文改錯(cuò)。It is Mother’s Day today. Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. While he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked dishes in kitchen. The dishes I cooked was Mom’s favorite. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and moving to tears.

　　【答案】

　　71.so--but

　　72.houseworks--housework

　　73.or--and

　　74.get--got

　　75.on去掉；

　　76. While--When

　　77.her--his

　　78.in后面加the

　　79.were--was

　　80.moving--moved

　　72.houseworks--housework 考查名詞。“housework”是不可數(shù)名詞，故把 houseworks---housework—and

　　考查連詞

　　both---and---，兩個(gè)都---。故把 or---and。—got

　　考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。句意：在母親節(jié)我們起床早。根據(jù)句意可知用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，故把get---gotgo shopping 去購(gòu)物。可知去掉on—When 考查連詞。句意：當(dāng)他回來(lái)時(shí)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)他手里有朵花。

　　77.her--his

　　考查代詞。句意：在爸爸手里。故把her---his

　　【江西省豐城中學(xué)2024屆高三上學(xué)期第一次段考】短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題,每小題1分,滿分10分）

　　短文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每行中最多兩處錯(cuò)誤。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在此處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出增加的詞;

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉;

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計(jì)分。

　　Dear Diana,

　　Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.

　　Much love,

　　Fiona

　　【答案】

　　73.Unfortunate-- Unfortunately

　　74.for--as

　　75.mile--miles

　　76.unless--until

　　77.here--there

　　78.as后面加a

　　79.they--We

　　80.to去掉

　　考點(diǎn) ：短文改錯(cuò)。

　　【湖北省沙市中學(xué)2024屆高三上學(xué)期第二次考試】短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.

　　【答案】

　　1.side→sides

　　2.from→of

　　3.sit→sitting

　　4.easy→easily

　　5.is→was

　　6.them→it

　　7.not去掉

　　8.in^ hurry→a

　　9.felt→feel

　　10.If→Although/Though

　　3.sit→sitting

　　動(dòng)詞形式錯(cuò)誤。Enjoy后用v-ing形式。第二句：sit→sitting。 4.easy→easily

　　詞性錯(cuò)誤。此處用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞see。第三句：easy→easily修飾動(dòng)詞see應(yīng)用副詞，所以easy改為easily。 5.is→was

　　時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。根據(jù)上下文，用過(guò)去時(shí)。第五句： is→was時(shí)態(tài)誤用。全文用的都是過(guò)去時(shí)，所以要把is改為was。 6.them→it

　　代詞誤用。此處指代前面提到的park，用單數(shù)。第六句：them→it代詞誤用。這里指代的是park，所以要把them改為it。 7.not去掉

　　從句意判斷：從遠(yuǎn)處能欣賞到雪山美景。第七句：刪掉could后的not根據(jù)上下文可知這里應(yīng)該是表肯定，所以把not刪掉。【知識(shí)拓展】

　　含a的固定短語(yǔ)或習(xí)慣用法

　　have a rest 休息一會(huì)兒；have a good time 玩得開(kāi)心；have a break休息一會(huì)兒； in a hurry 匆忙；after a while過(guò)了一會(huì)兒； once in a while 偶爾；have a good idea 有一個(gè)好主意；as a matter of fact事實(shí)上； in a word總而言之； make a choice 做出選擇；a success一個(gè)成功的人，一件成功的事； a failure一個(gè)失敗的人，一件失敗的事； an honour一個(gè)榮幸的人，一個(gè)榮幸的事； have a good knowledge of 有某方面的好知識(shí)。

　　考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)

　　【湖北省襄陽(yáng)市第五中學(xué)2024屆高三上學(xué)期開(kāi)學(xué)考試】短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents and two sisters. As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together, we decided we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit-down dinner. First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays. After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy. For a while, the kids began to resist the idea. They said they would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a very different way. We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other’s problems. Since a few months, we all felt we had been able to build much strong relationships with the family than we had before.

　　【答案】

　　1.were改was/is

　　2.found前having

　　3.a week

　　4.and Fridays

　　5.a couple of weeks

　　6.would rather spend

　　7.Gradually

　　8.for改in

　　9.Since改After

　　10.strong改stronger

　　3.a week

　　句意：一周三個(gè)晚上。故把the week改成a week。

　　4.and Fridays

　　此處表示并列，故把or Fridays改成and Fridays。

　　5.a couple of weeks

　　a couple of+名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故把a(bǔ) couple of week改成a couple of weeks。

　　6.would rather spend

　　would rather后跟動(dòng)詞原形，故把would rather to spend改成would rather spend。

　　7.Gradually

　　副詞修飾整個(gè)句子，故把Gradual改成Gradually。

　　8.for改in

　　固定詞組：in a different way用一種不同的方式，故把for改in。

　　9.Since改After

　　句意：幾個(gè)月之后，故把Since改After。

　　10.strong改stronger

　　根據(jù)much和than可知此處用比較級(jí)，故把strong改stronger。

　　【知識(shí)歸納】

　　would rather的用法

　　一、概述。 1.含義。“寧愿/可,更/最好,還是…為好”。 2.用法。常+V原,常省略為’d rather,表優(yōu)先選擇的一種方式。無(wú)人稱(chēng),數(shù),詞性,時(shí)態(tài)變化,所有的人稱(chēng)情況均用would rather. 3.否定形式。would rather not do sth。例: Mr Li would rather not listen to rock music 4.would /had在此決無(wú)“過(guò)去”之意，它是一個(gè)情態(tài)助動(dòng)詞。 If you’d rather be alone, we’ll all leave here. 如果你寧愿獨(dú)自呆著，那我們都離開(kāi)這兒。?

　　二、擴(kuò)展。 1.在兩者中取舍,表“寧愿……而不愿……/與其……寧可……”時(shí)，則可用would rather…than…或would…rather than…句型.? 例: I would rather watch TV at home than go to the cinema.? 2.也可以顛倒為：rather than…would… 例：Rather than work in such bad condition, he would give up 3.Would(rather)和than后都接不帶to的動(dòng)詞不定式，若選同一動(dòng)詞,那么than 后的動(dòng)詞可以省略。? 例: I would rather have noodles than rice.

　　三、would rather+從句，常用的虛擬語(yǔ)氣句型,謂語(yǔ)一般用過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)表示現(xiàn)在或?qū)?lái)。其意為“寧愿……,還是…… 好些”“一個(gè)人寧愿另一個(gè)人做某事”。引導(dǎo)從句的that常省略。在談到過(guò)去的動(dòng)作時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)則用過(guò)去完成時(shí)。?例: John wants to see me today. I would rather he came to tomorrow than today. 句中came不是表示過(guò)去而是表示將來(lái).

　　考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)

　　【湖北省襄陽(yáng)市第四中學(xué)2024屆高三八月第一周周考】短文改錯(cuò) （共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　英語(yǔ)課上，老師要求同桌相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下作文為你同桌所寫(xiě)，請(qǐng)你對(duì)其進(jìn)行修改。共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào) （^），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出改加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　Li Hui, my friend in high school, has dreamed becoming a cartoon artist since she was young. To her disappointed, her parents don’t agree with her decision at first. Therefore, Li Hui would not change her mind. She worked hardly to perfect her skills. Just before he finished high school, the chance came: the famous art school was holding a cartoon drawing competition. The first three winner would be given a scholarship to study drawing there. Li Hui told herself not to missing the chance. She readily entered the competition and came second. She is now a student in that school and I feel it certain that her dream will come true.

　　【答案】

　　71.dreamed后加of或aboutdisappointed?→?disappointment.

　　73.don’t?→?didn’t.

　　74.Therefore?→?However.

　　75.hardly?→?hard.

　　76.he?→?she.

　　77.the?→?a.

　　78.winner?→?winners.

　　79.?missing?→?miss.

　　80.去掉it73.don’t?→?didn’t.考查時(shí)態(tài)。故事是高中時(shí)發(fā)生的事要用過(guò)去時(shí)，故don’t?→?didn’t.

　　74.Therefore?→?However.考查連詞。句意：她的父母起初不同意她的決定，然而她沒(méi)有改變主意。此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折不是因果，故Therefore?→?However.

　　75.hardly?→?hard.考查副詞。hardly?幾乎不；?hard努力地。此處指她努力工作完善技能。表示“努力地”，故hardly?→?hard.

　　76.he?→?she.考查代詞。上文提到李慧，代詞用的是she，her是女生，故he?→?she.

　　77.the?→?a.考查冠詞。此處指一次機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)了，表示一次，故the?→?a.

　　78.winner?→?winners.考查名詞。此處指前三名獲勝者所以名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故winner?→?winners.

　　79.?missing?→?miss.考查動(dòng)詞形式。tell sb. not to do sth.告訴某人不要做某事，to后用動(dòng)詞原形，故?missing?→?miss.

　　80.去掉itfeel是系動(dòng)詞certain是表語(yǔ)，不用it。故去掉it短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假定英語(yǔ)課上英語(yǔ)老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中至多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用（﹨）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　This morning I saw off my aunt at railway station. There were many passenger in the waiting room. I saw an old lady crying sad because she had lost her ticket and not able to afford another one. I was thinking about helping her when a man come up to comfort her. Then he bought her a ticket with his own money. The old Lady was so moving that she could hardly say a word. She grasped his hand and asked for his name or address. But he only smile and said, “It’s my pleasure.” Then he left away quickly. I was greatly moved by such a man he warmed others with his love.

　　【答案】

　　1.at ∧railway加the

　　2.passenger--- passengers

　　3.sad---sadly

　　4.and ∧not加was

　　5.come---came

　　6.moving---moved

　　7.or---and

　　8.smile--smiled

　　9.去掉away

　　10.he---who

　　3.sad---sadly