【金版教程】2024高考英語二輪復習訓練：4-3-2 圖畫作文a（含解析）

　　建議用時：35分鐘

　　一、按寫作步驟完成下面寫作任務

　　[2024·北京朝陽區一模]假設你是紅星中學高二(1)班的學生李華，上周日你班組織到首都圖書館參加一天的文化志愿活動，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英語寫一篇日記，記述活動的全過程。

　　注意：詞數不少于60；日記的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　March 29th，SundayFine

　　Today some classmates and I served at Capital Library as volunteers.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　第一步：審題。

　　1．本文是________類作文

　　2．體裁是________

　　3．人稱是________

　　4．時態是________

　　答案：1.圖畫　2.應用文(日記)　3.第一人稱　4.一般過去時態

　　第二步：聯想詞匯——緊扣文章主題(圖畫內容)。

　　1．集合：________

　　答案：gather

　　2．培訓：________

　　答案：train

　　3．操作電腦：________

　　答案：operate the computers

　　4．借(還)書：________

　　答案：borrow or return books

　　5．志愿者身份卡：________

　　答案：volunteer identity card

　　6．開始著手做：________

　　答案：get down to

　　7．整理書架：________

　　答案：finish bookshelves

　　8．認真對待：________

　　答案：take...seriously

　　9．對……說再見：________

　　答案：say good-bye to

　　10．分享感受：________

　　答案：share feelings

　　第三步：連詞成句——注意緊扣題目要求，引出要點。

　　(一)完成句子

　　1．We ________ at the gate of the library.

　　我們在圖書館門口集合。

　　答案：gathered together

　　2．We ________ by a librarian.

　　我們首先接受圖書管理員的培訓。

　　答案：were first trained

　　3．How ________ to borrow or return books?

　　我們應如何操作電腦來借(還)書。

　　答案：should we operate the computers

　　4．We ________.

　　我們可以幫助讀者。

　　答案：could help readers

　　5．We ________ and volunteer identity card and ________ our work.

　　我們穿上志愿者服裝，戴上標志，便開始工作。

　　答案：wore the volunteer uniform; got down to

　　6．________ helped with finishing bookshelves.

　　一些同學幫助整理書架。

　　答案：Some students

　　7．Some________ to the people. Those people had problems with ________.

　　有些人幫助一些人，這些人在使用電腦方面有困難。

　　答案：offered assistance; using the computers

　　8．When ________， we did our part in helping others.

　　我們做志愿工作時，我們盡力幫助他人。

　　答案：doing voluntary work

　　(二)根據要求，對以上句子進行升級

　　升級一：把2、3句升級為“疑問詞＋to do”結構的簡單句。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：We were first trained by a librarian on how to borrow or return books.

　　升級二：把升級一和句4，用so that句式連接起來。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：We were first trained by a librarian on how to borrow or return books so that we could help readers later.

　　升級三：把句5升級為分詞作狀語結構。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：Wearing the volunteer uniform and volunteer identity card, we got down to work.

　　升級四：把句7升級為定語從句。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：Some offered assistance to the people who had problems with using the computers.

　　升級五：把句8升級為“連詞＋非謂語”的省略結構。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：When doing voluntary work, we did our part in helping others.

　　第四步：做好銜接，連句成篇。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　One possible version：

　　March_29th,_SundayFine

　　Today_some_classmates_and_I_served_at_Capital_Library_as_volunteers. At 9 o'clock this morning, we gathered together at the gate of the library. After getting into the library, we were first trained by a librarian on how to operate the computers to borrow or return books so that we could help readers later. Then, wearing the volunteer uniform and volunteer identity card, we got down to our work. Some of us helped with finishing bookshelves and some offered assistance to the people who had problems with using the computers. All of us took our tasks seriously and tried to do them well.

　　Time passed quickly. Before we knew it, it was time to say goodbye to the staff. On the way back, we shared our feelings happily. When doing voluntary work, we did our part in helping others. Meanwhile, it promoted our social awareness. We all believe volunteering is rewarding and look forward to more of it.

　　二、課下練筆——仿照即時演練的步驟，完成下列書面表達

　　[2024·遼寧五校聯考一]請你根據對下面這幅漫畫的理解，以“Come back to reality”為題，用英語寫一篇作文。

　　你的作文應包括以下內容：

　　1．簡要描述漫畫的內容；

　　2．概述你對這幅漫畫的理解；

　　3．舉例說明你會怎樣做。

　　注意：1.可參照漫畫適當發揮；

　　2．作文詞數100左右；

　　3．作文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

　　Come back to reality

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　One possible version：

　　Come back to reality

　　As is shown in the picture, a woman is sitting in front of a computer and trying to make friends on the Net. Just outside the door, many people are watching, eager to make friends with her. However, they are all neglected.

　　The picture reminds me of many young people who are computer addicts themselves in the virtual world.

　　What is worse is that the situation continues and sooner or later those people will be eventually cut off from the real world. There is no doubt that the virtual world can be exciting, but that's not the reason for them. Too much time and energy devoted to the Internet will lead to a disaster both physically and mentally. In other words, the real world that we live in is what really counts.

　　As for myself, I'll devote myself to more worthwhile things in real life, from making friends to studying, only in this way can I make my life full and valuable.

　　建議用時：35分鐘

　　一、按寫作步驟完成下面寫作任務

　　[2024·北京朝陽區一模]假設你是紅星中學高二(1)班的學生李華，上周日你班組織到首都圖書館參加一天的文化志愿活動，請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英語寫一篇日記，記述活動的全過程。

　　注意：詞數不少于60；日記的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　March 29th，SundayFine

　　Today some classmates and I served at Capital Library as volunteers.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　第一步：審題。

　　1．本文是________類作文

　　2．體裁是________

　　3．人稱是________

　　4．時態是________

　　答案：1.圖畫　2.應用文(日記)　3.第一人稱　4.一般過去時態

　　第二步：聯想詞匯——緊扣文章主題(圖畫內容)。

　　1．集合：________

　　答案：gather

　　2．培訓：________

　　答案：train

　　3．操作電腦：________

　　答案：operate the computers

　　4．借(還)書：________

　　答案：borrow or return books

　　5．志愿者身份卡：________

　　答案：volunteer identity card

　　6．開始著手做：________

　　答案：get down to

　　7．整理書架：________

　　答案：finish bookshelves

　　8．認真對待：________

　　答案：take...seriously

　　9．對……說再見：________

　　答案：say good-bye to

　　10．分享感受：________

　　答案：share feelings

　　第三步：連詞成句——注意緊扣題目要求，引出要點。

　　(一)完成句子

　　1．We ________ at the gate of the library.

　　我們在圖書館門口集合。

　　答案：gathered together

　　2．We ________ by a librarian.

　　我們首先接受圖書管理員的培訓。

　　答案：were first trained

　　3．How ________ to borrow or return books?

　　我們應如何操作電腦來借(還)書。

　　答案：should we operate the computers

　　4．We ________.

　　我們可以幫助讀者。

　　答案：could help readers

　　5．We ________ and volunteer identity card and ________ our work.

　　我們穿上志愿者服裝，戴上標志，便開始工作。

　　答案：wore the volunteer uniform; got down to

　　6．________ helped with finishing bookshelves.

　　一些同學幫助整理書架。

　　答案：Some students

　　7．Some________ to the people. Those people had problems with ________.

　　有些人幫助一些人，這些人在使用電腦方面有困難。

　　答案：offered assistance; using the computers

　　8．When ________， we did our part in helping others.

　　我們做志愿工作時，我們盡力幫助他人。

　　答案：doing voluntary work

　　(二)根據要求，對以上句子進行升級

　　升級一：把2、3句升級為“疑問詞＋to do”結構的簡單句。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：We were first trained by a librarian on how to borrow or return books.

　　升級二：把升級一和句4，用so that句式連接起來。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：We were first trained by a librarian on how to borrow or return books so that we could help readers later.

　　升級三：把句5升級為分詞作狀語結構。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：Wearing the volunteer uniform and volunteer identity card, we got down to work.

　　升級四：把句7升級為定語從句。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：Some offered assistance to the people who had problems with using the computers.

　　升級五：把句8升級為“連詞＋非謂語”的省略結構。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：When doing voluntary work, we did our part in helping others.

　　第四步：做好銜接，連句成篇。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　One possible version：

　　March_29th,_SundayFine

　　Today_some_classmates_and_I_served_at_Capital_Library_as_volunteers. At 9 o'clock this morning, we gathered together at the gate of the library. After getting into the library, we were first trained by a librarian on how to operate the computers to borrow or return books so that we could help readers later. Then, wearing the volunteer uniform and volunteer identity card, we got down to our work. Some of us helped with finishing bookshelves and some offered assistance to the people who had problems with using the computers. All of us took our tasks seriously and tried to do them well.

　　Time passed quickly. Before we knew it, it was time to say goodbye to the staff. On the way back, we shared our feelings happily. When doing voluntary work, we did our part in helping others. Meanwhile, it promoted our social awareness. We all believe volunteering is rewarding and look forward to more of it.

　　二、課下練筆——仿照即時演練的步驟，完成下列書面表達

　　[2024·遼寧五校聯考一]請你根據對下面這幅漫畫的理解，以“Come back to reality”為題，用英語寫一篇作文。

　　你的作文應包括以下內容：

　　1．簡要描述漫畫的內容；

　　2．概述你對這幅漫畫的理解；

　　3．舉例說明你會怎樣做。

　　注意：1.可參照漫畫適當發揮；

　　2．作文詞數100左右；

　　3．作文中不得提及有關考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

　　Come back to reality

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　One possible version：

　　Come back to reality

　　As is shown in the picture, a woman is sitting in front of a computer and trying to make friends on the Net. Just outside the door, many people are watching, eager to make friends with her. However, they are all neglected.

　　The picture reminds me of many young people who are computer addicts themselves in the virtual world.

　　What is worse is that the situation continues and sooner or later those people will be eventually cut off from the real world. There is no doubt that the virtual world can be exciting, but that's not the reason for them. Too much time and energy devoted to the Internet will lead to a disaster both physically and mentally. In other words, the real world that we live in is what really counts.

　　As for myself, I'll devote myself to more worthwhile things in real life, from making friends to studying, only in this way can I make my life full and valuable.