2024屆高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)《全優(yōu)課堂》寫(xiě)作技能步步高寫(xiě)作層級(jí)特訓(xùn)：要訣4.3.滿分作文登場(chǎng)（新人教版含答案）

　　第三部分　要訣四

　　(2024課標(biāo)Ⅰ)

　　假定你是李華，計(jì)劃暑假期間去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請(qǐng)給該校寫(xiě)封信，詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。

　　注意：

　　1．詞數(shù)100左右；

　　2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　3．參考詞匯：住宿：accommodation

　　Dear Sir/Madem，

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　考場(chǎng)作文

　　Dear Sir/Madam，

　　I am a student ①live in China.I want to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.(1)I've seen your advertisement and I'd like to know something more about your 3 week English course. First, (2) I want to know the start date of the course, class hours per week and the type of accommodation.In addition, I want to know how much I have to ②pay the course.Can you tell me whether the accommodation is included in the fee?

　　I am looking forward to ③hear from you.

　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　1．錯(cuò)誤聚焦：

　　(1)①live處于非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的位置，它與student構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故將live改為_(kāi)___________。

　　(2)表示“為……支付”時(shí)，pay是不及物動(dòng)詞，故在②pay后加介詞_____________。

　　(3)look forward to中的to為介詞，故將③hear改為_(kāi)_____________。

　　【答案】(1)living　(2)for　(3)hearing

　　2．高分靚句：

　　(1)將畫(huà)線(1)改為含有非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的句子： _________________________,_I'd like to know something more about your 3-week English course.

　　(2)將畫(huà)線(2)改為含有not only的倒裝句：___________________________________,_but also class hours per week and the type of accommodation.

　　【答案】(1)Having seen your advertisement

　　(2)Not only do I want to know the start date of the course

　　參考范文：

　　Dear Sir / Madam，

　　I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad, and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　(2024河北正定中學(xué)高三第一次考試)

　　仔細(xì)觀察下面一幅圖畫(huà)，根據(jù)圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)100左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

　　情景：假定你叫李華，家住香港。你和幾個(gè)朋友約定星期六在中心公園聚會(huì)。現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封信邀請(qǐng)?jiān)趯W(xué)校居住的Mrs.Brown參加，并根據(jù)下圖告訴她來(lái)中心公園的路線。

　　參考詞匯：聚會(huì)：have a gathering party

　　Dear Mrs.Brown，

　　We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday.Here is how you can find us.

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　One possible version：

　　Dear Mrs.Brown，

　　We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday.Here is how you can find us.We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park.Maybe you've been there, haven't you?

　　Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street.Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital.Just opposite it is a No.177 bus stop.Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop.Central Park is just in front of it.We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake.What a funny thing! Do come on time.We'll wait for you at the park gate.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　第三部分　要訣四

　　(2024課標(biāo)Ⅰ)

　　假定你是李華，計(jì)劃暑假期間去英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請(qǐng)給該校寫(xiě)封信，詢問(wèn)有關(guān)情況(箭頭所指內(nèi)容)。

　　注意：

　　1．詞數(shù)100左右；

　　2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　3．參考詞匯：住宿：accommodation

　　Dear Sir/Madem，

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　考場(chǎng)作文

　　Dear Sir/Madam，

　　I am a student ①live in China.I want to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.(1)I've seen your advertisement and I'd like to know something more about your 3 week English course. First, (2) I want to know the start date of the course, class hours per week and the type of accommodation.In addition, I want to know how much I have to ②pay the course.Can you tell me whether the accommodation is included in the fee?

　　I am looking forward to ③hear from you.

　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　1．錯(cuò)誤聚焦：

　　(1)①live處于非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的位置，它與student構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故將live改為_(kāi)___________。

　　(2)表示“為……支付”時(shí)，pay是不及物動(dòng)詞，故在②pay后加介詞_____________。

　　(3)look forward to中的to為介詞，故將③hear改為_(kāi)_____________。

　　【答案】(1)living　(2)for　(3)hearing

　　2．高分靚句：

　　(1)將畫(huà)線(1)改為含有非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的句子： _________________________,_I'd like to know something more about your 3-week English course.

　　(2)將畫(huà)線(2)改為含有not only的倒裝句：___________________________________,_but also class hours per week and the type of accommodation.

　　【答案】(1)Having seen your advertisement

　　(2)Not only do I want to know the start date of the course

　　參考范文：

　　Dear Sir / Madam，

　　I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad, and I'd like to know something more about your six-week English course.First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　(2024河北正定中學(xué)高三第一次考試)

　　仔細(xì)觀察下面一幅圖畫(huà)，根據(jù)圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)100左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

　　情景：假定你叫李華，家住香港。你和幾個(gè)朋友約定星期六在中心公園聚會(huì)。現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封信邀請(qǐng)?jiān)趯W(xué)校居住的Mrs.Brown參加，并根據(jù)下圖告訴她來(lái)中心公園的路線。

　　參考詞匯：聚會(huì)：have a gathering party

　　Dear Mrs.Brown，

　　We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday.Here is how you can find us.

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　One possible version：

　　Dear Mrs.Brown，

　　We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday.Here is how you can find us.We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park.Maybe you've been there, haven't you?

　　Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street.Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital.Just opposite it is a No.177 bus stop.Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop.Central Park is just in front of it.We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake.What a funny thing! Do come on time.We'll wait for you at the park gate.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua