浙江省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+書面表達（16）
浙江省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+書面表達（1）第一節：短文改錯 （共10小題; 每小題1分，滿分10分）
假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot．I was in great
pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if
happened until the class was over．
Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even
refused the offer of help from my classmates．As the result, the hurt on my foot became
worse．Now I know I am wrong．We can tell others our need for help and accept their
help．Someday we can help him in return．n this way we fit in with each other
happily and peacefully．50個學生健康問題的調查表。請根據表格（table）內容，綜述學
生當前存在的健康問題，并就中學生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建議。
問題類型 學習焦慮 逆反心理 缺乏交往 睡眠不足 缺乏鍛煉 視力不佳
人
數 35 20 15 40 25 35
比
例 70% 40% 30% 80% 50% 70%
要求：字數100-120
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溫馨提示：寫作時，先把中文要點（信息）寫成英文詞組，然后把詞組擴成句子，再把句子串
成篇章。全文分兩段表達。
改錯（10分）
while 改為when； hurted 改為 hurt；something 改為 nothing；
walk 改為walking；I still 前面去掉but； As the result 改為As a result；
on my foot 改為 in my foot；
I am wrong 改為
I was wrong；
help him in return 改為help them in return；
Only in this way 后面加上can / will / shall
書面表達（30分）
As is apparently shown in the table above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of the students having learning anxieties as well as bad eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep．Coming next is the lack of physical exercise．40% of the students surveyed won’t obey their parents or teachers．Still fewer claimed not to have enough communication with others．
So far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies．Just as a saying goes: “All work but no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body one cannot achieve anything; however, too much attention has been paid only to studies．Therefore, I
we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems．Only in this way can we lead a healthy life．
浙江省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+書面表達（1）第一節：短文改錯 （共10小題; 每小題1分，滿分10分）
假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot．I was in great
pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if
happened until the class was over．
Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even
refused the offer of help from my classmates．As the result, the hurt on my foot became
worse．Now I know I am wrong．We can tell others our need for help and accept their
help．Someday we can help him in return．n this way we fit in with each other
happily and peacefully．50個學生健康問題的調查表。請根據表格（table）內容，綜述學
生當前存在的健康問題，并就中學生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建議。
問題類型 學習焦慮 逆反心理 缺乏交往 睡眠不足 缺乏鍛煉 視力不佳
人
數 35 20 15 40 25 35
比
例 70% 40% 30% 80% 50% 70%
要求：字數100-120
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
溫馨提示：寫作時，先把中文要點（信息）寫成英文詞組，然后把詞組擴成句子，再把句子串
成篇章。全文分兩段表達。
改錯（10分）
while 改為when； hurted 改為 hurt；something 改為 nothing；
walk 改為walking；I still 前面去掉but； As the result 改為As a result；
on my foot 改為 in my foot；
I am wrong 改為
I was wrong；
help him in return 改為help them in return；
Only in this way 后面加上can / will / shall
書面表達（30分）
As is apparently shown in the table above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of the students having learning anxieties as well as bad eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep．Coming next is the lack of physical exercise．40% of the students surveyed won’t obey their parents or teachers．Still fewer claimed not to have enough communication with others．
So far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies．Just as a saying goes: “All work but no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body one cannot achieve anything; however, too much attention has been paid only to studies．Therefore, I
we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems．Only in this way can we lead a healthy life．
