考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文的批改63

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir：

　　I am writing to apply for the manager position of the human resources department in your company. I learned your advertisement from a friend of mine. I couldnt help but saying that I am pretty qualified for the position.

　　I graduated form Beijing University in 2004 as an English-majored undergraduate. After graduation, I have been working for a tourist agency for almost 2 years, during which I have accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with different kinds of people, especially foreigners. Its the two-year working experience that makes me believe I have the ability and confidence to fulfill the duty required by the manager position.

　　I would be grateful if you could grante me an interview. I am really looking forward for your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir(因為不知道是男士還是女士，所以用Sir or Madam)：(英語中用逗號)

　　I am writing to apply for the manager position of the human resources department in your company. I learned your advertisement from a friend of mine. I couldnt help but saying that I am pretty qualified for the position.

　　I graduated form(from) Beijing University in 2004 as an English-majored undergraduate. After graduation, I have been working for a tourist agency for almost 2 years, during which I have accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with different kinds of people, especially(加介詞with) foreigners. Its the two-year working experience that makes me believe I have the ability and confidence to fulfill the duty required by the manager position.

　　I would be grateful if you could grante(拼寫錯誤) me an interview. I am really looking forward for your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming 點評：5-6分第二段寫的不是很好，最好從你的學歷、經歷和脾氣秉性方面寫，不要只寫一個方面?？荚囍械淖魑膬热菔强梢跃幵斓模驗榭疾斓氖悄銘媚撤N問題的能力。

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir：

　　I am writing to apply for the manager position of the human resources department in your company. I learned your advertisement from a friend of mine. I couldnt help but saying that I am pretty qualified for the position.

　　I graduated form Beijing University in 2004 as an English-majored undergraduate. After graduation, I have been working for a tourist agency for almost 2 years, during which I have accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with different kinds of people, especially foreigners. Its the two-year working experience that makes me believe I have the ability and confidence to fulfill the duty required by the manager position.

　　I would be grateful if you could grante me an interview. I am really looking forward for your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir(因為不知道是男士還是女士，所以用Sir or Madam)：(英語中用逗號)

　　I am writing to apply for the manager position of the human resources department in your company. I learned your advertisement from a friend of mine. I couldnt help but saying that I am pretty qualified for the position.

　　I graduated form(from) Beijing University in 2004 as an English-majored undergraduate. After graduation, I have been working for a tourist agency for almost 2 years, during which I have accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with different kinds of people, especially(加介詞with) foreigners. Its the two-year working experience that makes me believe I have the ability and confidence to fulfill the duty required by the manager position.

　　I would be grateful if you could grante(拼寫錯誤) me an interview. I am really looking forward for your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming 點評：5-6分第二段寫的不是很好，最好從你的學歷、經歷和脾氣秉性方面寫，不要只寫一個方面?？荚囍械淖魑膬热菔强梢跃幵斓模驗榭疾斓氖悄銘媚撤N問題的能力。