考研英語看作文范例點評：中西文化交流
2024考研英語看圖作文范例點評：中西文化交流
寫作原文
In the far-reaching picture, a emperor is served with coffee by a eunuch who is holding a tray on his head and sayingYour majesty，coffee time, please.The picture wants to convey the communication between Chinese and Western cultures.More than 100 years ago, when China was still in the Qing dynasty, the government carried out the closing door policy which meant cutting down any kind of communication with foreigners. As a consequence, the power of the country had been falling down gradually and less than half of land was controlled by foreign countries. The peoples living conditions were low. Whereas, after 100 years when Chinese leader Deng Xiaoping developed and carried out the opening up policy, the appearance of China began to convert. As we all know, Chinas GDP has already ranked the second all over the world, and the living conditions among people are much better than those in Qing dynasty. Obviously, the communication between Chinaand Western culture has changed China forever.Nowadays, many people have already realized that we should take the essence and discard the dregs. I wanna emphasize that all of us must do as what we say, and the future is bright.
總體點評
本文立意正確，內(nèi)容切題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，保持了自己一貫的水平，且與之前堵車現(xiàn)象一文相比，語法錯誤少了很多，說明作者是很用心在修改自己的作文。不過，仍需要注意以下問題：1、注意細(xì)節(jié)性的語法錯誤，如aemperor，元音開始的單詞前用an。2、文章中的一些表達(dá)很好，如we should take the essence and discard the dregs，需注意的是保持句子的連貫性，使整個篇章讀起來順暢自然。3、文章依然存有少許漢式思維的句子，應(yīng)在此方面加強(qiáng)。因此，建議作者在以后的考研英語寫作練習(xí)中，注意每篇文章寫好后反復(fù)練習(xí)，不僅使文章中的句子有亮點，而且努力達(dá)到文章從開始到結(jié)尾都保持高水準(zhǔn)，這樣文章才會流暢自然。
參考分?jǐn)?shù)：15
考研英語寫作水平的提升是需要不斷地練習(xí)，在改正錯誤中不斷取得進(jìn)步，不怕犯錯誤，怕明知道犯錯誤卻不面對。希望廣大考生切記。2024年，加油吧，沖擊考研英語高分!
2024考研英語看圖作文范例點評：中西文化交流
寫作原文
In the far-reaching picture, a emperor is served with coffee by a eunuch who is holding a tray on his head and sayingYour majesty，coffee time, please.The picture wants to convey the communication between Chinese and Western cultures.More than 100 years ago, when China was still in the Qing dynasty, the government carried out the closing door policy which meant cutting down any kind of communication with foreigners. As a consequence, the power of the country had been falling down gradually and less than half of land was controlled by foreign countries. The peoples living conditions were low. Whereas, after 100 years when Chinese leader Deng Xiaoping developed and carried out the opening up policy, the appearance of China began to convert. As we all know, Chinas GDP has already ranked the second all over the world, and the living conditions among people are much better than those in Qing dynasty. Obviously, the communication between Chinaand Western culture has changed China forever.Nowadays, many people have already realized that we should take the essence and discard the dregs. I wanna emphasize that all of us must do as what we say, and the future is bright.
總體點評
本文立意正確，內(nèi)容切題，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，保持了自己一貫的水平，且與之前堵車現(xiàn)象一文相比，語法錯誤少了很多，說明作者是很用心在修改自己的作文。不過，仍需要注意以下問題：1、注意細(xì)節(jié)性的語法錯誤，如aemperor，元音開始的單詞前用an。2、文章中的一些表達(dá)很好，如we should take the essence and discard the dregs，需注意的是保持句子的連貫性，使整個篇章讀起來順暢自然。3、文章依然存有少許漢式思維的句子，應(yīng)在此方面加強(qiáng)。因此，建議作者在以后的考研英語寫作練習(xí)中，注意每篇文章寫好后反復(fù)練習(xí)，不僅使文章中的句子有亮點，而且努力達(dá)到文章從開始到結(jié)尾都保持高水準(zhǔn)，這樣文章才會流暢自然。
參考分?jǐn)?shù)：15
考研英語寫作水平的提升是需要不斷地練習(xí)，在改正錯誤中不斷取得進(jìn)步，不怕犯錯誤，怕明知道犯錯誤卻不面對。希望廣大考生切記。2024年，加油吧，沖擊考研英語高分!
