考研英語小作文批改感謝信5-7分例文3

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第三篇

　　Dear Teacher,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed my CET4 and CET6.

　　Even one agrees that it was you who has always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Teacher,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed(改為failing)(加to pass) my CET4 and CET6.

　　Even one agrees that it was you who has always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction(改為instructing) in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同學你好，作文沒有什么大問題，但是要注意時態的一致以及某些句型的固定用法。

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　5-7分

　　第三篇

　　Dear Teacher,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed my CET4 and CET6.

　　Even one agrees that it was you who has always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Teacher,

　　I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your ongoing patience and selfless care. If it had not been for your assistance in our English study, I fear that I would have been failed(改為failing)(加to pass) my CET4 and CET6.

　　Even one agrees that it was you who has always been devoting most of your free time to day to day English teaching and instruction(改為instructing) in test-taking skills. Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　7分

　　同學你好，作文沒有什么大問題，但是要注意時態的一致以及某些句型的固定用法。