英語四級寫作計劃第二周第3天說明危害段常規寫法
b.列舉危害
1)First , the travel craze puts a heavy burden on the traffic system .
首先，旅游熱潮給交通系統造句成了沉重的負擔。
2)Second , thousands of tourists flood into scenic spots , causing over crowdedness and safety problens .
第二，成千上萬的游客涌向各個景點，帶來過度擁擠和安全問題。
3)Secondly , some students rely on the reference books too much , which is unfavorable to the improvement of their ability to sork out the solutions by themselves .
第二，一些學生過分地依賴參考書，這不利于培養他們獨立解決問題的能力。
4)Thirdly , there are some reference books filled with mistakes , which might mislead students .
第三，一些參考書中錯誤連篇，可能會誤導學生。
5)Finally , disposable products make people develop a throwaway habit , which is harmful to our social atmosphere .
最后，一次性產品可能會讓人們養成隨手扔東西的習慣，這將對整個社會的風氣造成不利的影響。
6)On the hand , it is a selfish behavior , which damages other students imterests .
一方面，這是一種自私的行為，會損害其他同學的利益。
7)For one thing , married students have to take care of their family , which brings more difficulties for school management .
一方面，已婚學生必須要照顧家庭，這會給學校管理帶來更多的困難。
8)For on thing , it takes up so much of the pupils time that the can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment .
一方面，這會占用學生太多的時間，導致學生幾乎沒有足夠的時間休息和娛樂。
9)Moreover , ones violating public morality not only invades others benefits but also does harm to himself .
而且，違反公共道德不僅侵犯他人的利益也會傷害到自己。
10)Furthermore , disposable products cause serious pollution to our environment .
而且，一次性產品會給環境造成嚴重的污染。
11)More seriously / Even worse , some students might lose control of their emotions and behaviors .
更糟的是，一些學生可能會無法控制自己的情緒和行為。
12)Whats worse , depression is one of the main reasons that people kill themselves .
更糟的是，抑郁是導致人們自殺的主要原因之一。
13)These disasters have killed millions of people , destroyed countless homes , and wiped out numerous peeces of fertile land .
這些災難已經奪走了數百萬人的生命，摧毀了無數的家園，還吞噬了大量肥沃的土地。
14)Long exposure to noise will lead to the loss of hearing and powwibly drive people mad .
長期接觸噪聲會導致失聰，還可能使人發瘋。
15)For example , if most people buy pirated products , those original producers will suffer great damage and might lose the enthusiasm to continue their producing , which in turn influences consumers .
例如，如果大多數人都購買盜版產品，那些正版產品的生產者將遭受極大的損失，而且可能會失去繼續生產的熱情，這反過來會影響到消費者。
16)Many college students are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are seriously affected .
許多大學生過分迷戀這些游戲，導致他們的健康和學習成績受到了嚴重的影響。
b.列舉危害
1)First , the travel craze puts a heavy burden on the traffic system .
首先，旅游熱潮給交通系統造句成了沉重的負擔。
2)Second , thousands of tourists flood into scenic spots , causing over crowdedness and safety problens .
第二，成千上萬的游客涌向各個景點，帶來過度擁擠和安全問題。
3)Secondly , some students rely on the reference books too much , which is unfavorable to the improvement of their ability to sork out the solutions by themselves .
第二，一些學生過分地依賴參考書，這不利于培養他們獨立解決問題的能力。
4)Thirdly , there are some reference books filled with mistakes , which might mislead students .
第三，一些參考書中錯誤連篇，可能會誤導學生。
5)Finally , disposable products make people develop a throwaway habit , which is harmful to our social atmosphere .
最后，一次性產品可能會讓人們養成隨手扔東西的習慣，這將對整個社會的風氣造成不利的影響。
6)On the hand , it is a selfish behavior , which damages other students imterests .
一方面，這是一種自私的行為，會損害其他同學的利益。
7)For one thing , married students have to take care of their family , which brings more difficulties for school management .
一方面，已婚學生必須要照顧家庭，這會給學校管理帶來更多的困難。
8)For on thing , it takes up so much of the pupils time that the can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment .
一方面，這會占用學生太多的時間，導致學生幾乎沒有足夠的時間休息和娛樂。
9)Moreover , ones violating public morality not only invades others benefits but also does harm to himself .
而且，違反公共道德不僅侵犯他人的利益也會傷害到自己。
10)Furthermore , disposable products cause serious pollution to our environment .
而且，一次性產品會給環境造成嚴重的污染。
11)More seriously / Even worse , some students might lose control of their emotions and behaviors .
更糟的是，一些學生可能會無法控制自己的情緒和行為。
12)Whats worse , depression is one of the main reasons that people kill themselves .
更糟的是，抑郁是導致人們自殺的主要原因之一。
13)These disasters have killed millions of people , destroyed countless homes , and wiped out numerous peeces of fertile land .
這些災難已經奪走了數百萬人的生命，摧毀了無數的家園，還吞噬了大量肥沃的土地。
14)Long exposure to noise will lead to the loss of hearing and powwibly drive people mad .
長期接觸噪聲會導致失聰，還可能使人發瘋。
15)For example , if most people buy pirated products , those original producers will suffer great damage and might lose the enthusiasm to continue their producing , which in turn influences consumers .
例如，如果大多數人都購買盜版產品，那些正版產品的生產者將遭受極大的損失，而且可能會失去繼續生產的熱情，這反過來會影響到消費者。
16)Many college students are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are seriously affected .
許多大學生過分迷戀這些游戲，導致他們的健康和學習成績受到了嚴重的影響。
