六級(jí)沖刺備考:翻譯技巧(12)
19. The physicist rightly dreads precise argument,since an argument that is convincing only if it is precise loses all its force if the assumptions on which it is based are slightly changed,whereas an argument that is convincing though imprecise may well be stable under small perturbations of its underlying assumptions. (5+)物理學(xué)家恐懼于那些精確無(wú)誤的論據(jù)不無(wú)道理,因?yàn)槟撤N只有在它是精確無(wú)誤的條件下才令人置信的論據(jù),一旦它賴于建立其上的假設(shè)稍有變化,便會(huì)失去它一部的作用;而與此相反,一個(gè)盡管并不精確無(wú)誤但卻令人置信的論據(jù),在其基本假設(shè)(underlying assumption)稍微受干擾的情況下,仍然有可能是站得住腳的。
難句類型:復(fù)雜修飾
解釋:本句在文章中就是一個(gè)自然段,雖然長(zhǎng)度比不上前面第一章中舉的那個(gè)長(zhǎng)達(dá)10行的例子,但是難度不在那句話之下。本句堪稱句子的大雜燴,連主句帶從句居然一共有八個(gè)。從大往小說(shuō),由whereas連接了兩個(gè)大句子,whereas后面的句子中的主語(yǔ)an augument之后又跟了一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句that is convincing though imprecise, 修飾augument。whereas前面共有六個(gè)句子,由the physicist作主語(yǔ)的主句;由since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句,修飾since從句中主語(yǔ)an augument的由that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,此定語(yǔ)從句中的條件狀語(yǔ)從句only if it is precise; since從句中的條件狀語(yǔ)從句if the assumptions on which it is based are slightly changed,以及修飾此從句中的主語(yǔ)assumptions的定語(yǔ)從句on which it is based一共八個(gè)句子,從句套從句,實(shí)在令人嘆為觀止。
然而,在考試現(xiàn)場(chǎng)去數(shù)句子的數(shù)目,是只有呆子才會(huì)干的事,讀者們惟一要干的事就是反復(fù)閱讀這句話,什么時(shí)候練到不必去想其語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)就能按原文順序讀懂,才算初步掌握;再進(jìn)一步把它讀順,直到你看不出這個(gè)句子有什么特別的地方,看上去還挺舒服就算訓(xùn)練成功。
意群訓(xùn)練:The physicist rightly dreads precise argument, since an argument that is convincing only if it is precise loses all its force if the assumptions on which it is based are slightly changed, whereas an argument that is convincing though imprecise may well be stable under small perturbations of its underlying assumptions.
20. However,as they gained cohesion,the Bluestockings came to regard themselves as a womens group and to possess a sense of female solidarity lacking in the salonnieres,who remained isolated from one another by the primacy each held in her own salon. (4-)
起初,藍(lán)襪女們確實(shí)模仿了法國(guó)沙龍女主人,將男性襄括到其小圈子中來(lái)。然則,隨著她們獲得的凝聚力,她們漸趨將自己視作一女性團(tuán)體,并擁有了一種婦女團(tuán)結(jié)意識(shí),而這種意識(shí)在法國(guó)沙龍女主人身上則蕩然無(wú)存,因?yàn)樗齻兠總€(gè)人在其自己的沙龍中自視甚高而彼此孤立隔開(kāi)來(lái)。
難句類型:復(fù)雜修飾
解釋:本句讀到表示并列的連詞and開(kāi)始變難。and之后的不定式與前面的不定式是并列的,to的前面省略了一個(gè)與前面一樣的謂語(yǔ)came。 lacking之后的分詞作定語(yǔ)修飾a sense of female solidarity其后的由who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句又修飾逗號(hào)前面的salonnieres此從句中又有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句that each salonniere held in her own salon修飾其前的primacy,但是由于引導(dǎo)詞that在從句中作賓語(yǔ),因此被省略。
意群訓(xùn)練:However, as they gained cohesion, the Bluestocking came to regard themselves as a womens group and to possess a sense of female solidarity lacking in the salonnieres, who remained isolated from one another by the primacy each held in her own salon.
19. The physicist rightly dreads precise argument,since an argument that is convincing only if it is precise loses all its force if the assumptions on which it is based are slightly changed,whereas an argument that is convincing though imprecise may well be stable under small perturbations of its underlying assumptions. (5+)物理學(xué)家恐懼于那些精確無(wú)誤的論據(jù)不無(wú)道理,因?yàn)槟撤N只有在它是精確無(wú)誤的條件下才令人置信的論據(jù),一旦它賴于建立其上的假設(shè)稍有變化,便會(huì)失去它一部的作用;而與此相反,一個(gè)盡管并不精確無(wú)誤但卻令人置信的論據(jù),在其基本假設(shè)(underlying assumption)稍微受干擾的情況下,仍然有可能是站得住腳的。
難句類型:復(fù)雜修飾
解釋:本句在文章中就是一個(gè)自然段,雖然長(zhǎng)度比不上前面第一章中舉的那個(gè)長(zhǎng)達(dá)10行的例子,但是難度不在那句話之下。本句堪稱句子的大雜燴,連主句帶從句居然一共有八個(gè)。從大往小說(shuō),由whereas連接了兩個(gè)大句子,whereas后面的句子中的主語(yǔ)an augument之后又跟了一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句that is convincing though imprecise, 修飾augument。whereas前面共有六個(gè)句子,由the physicist作主語(yǔ)的主句;由since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句,修飾since從句中主語(yǔ)an augument的由that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句,此定語(yǔ)從句中的條件狀語(yǔ)從句only if it is precise; since從句中的條件狀語(yǔ)從句if the assumptions on which it is based are slightly changed,以及修飾此從句中的主語(yǔ)assumptions的定語(yǔ)從句on which it is based一共八個(gè)句子,從句套從句,實(shí)在令人嘆為觀止。
然而,在考試現(xiàn)場(chǎng)去數(shù)句子的數(shù)目,是只有呆子才會(huì)干的事,讀者們惟一要干的事就是反復(fù)閱讀這句話,什么時(shí)候練到不必去想其語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)就能按原文順序讀懂,才算初步掌握;再進(jìn)一步把它讀順,直到你看不出這個(gè)句子有什么特別的地方,看上去還挺舒服就算訓(xùn)練成功。
意群訓(xùn)練:The physicist rightly dreads precise argument, since an argument that is convincing only if it is precise loses all its force if the assumptions on which it is based are slightly changed, whereas an argument that is convincing though imprecise may well be stable under small perturbations of its underlying assumptions.
20. However,as they gained cohesion,the Bluestockings came to regard themselves as a womens group and to possess a sense of female solidarity lacking in the salonnieres,who remained isolated from one another by the primacy each held in her own salon. (4-)
起初,藍(lán)襪女們確實(shí)模仿了法國(guó)沙龍女主人,將男性襄括到其小圈子中來(lái)。然則,隨著她們獲得的凝聚力,她們漸趨將自己視作一女性團(tuán)體,并擁有了一種婦女團(tuán)結(jié)意識(shí),而這種意識(shí)在法國(guó)沙龍女主人身上則蕩然無(wú)存,因?yàn)樗齻兠總€(gè)人在其自己的沙龍中自視甚高而彼此孤立隔開(kāi)來(lái)。
難句類型:復(fù)雜修飾
解釋:本句讀到表示并列的連詞and開(kāi)始變難。and之后的不定式與前面的不定式是并列的,to的前面省略了一個(gè)與前面一樣的謂語(yǔ)came。 lacking之后的分詞作定語(yǔ)修飾a sense of female solidarity其后的由who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句又修飾逗號(hào)前面的salonnieres此從句中又有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句that each salonniere held in her own salon修飾其前的primacy,但是由于引導(dǎo)詞that在從句中作賓語(yǔ),因此被省略。
意群訓(xùn)練:However, as they gained cohesion, the Bluestocking came to regard themselves as a womens group and to possess a sense of female solidarity lacking in the salonnieres, who remained isolated from one another by the primacy each held in her own salon.