六級沖刺備考的翻譯技巧（8）

　　7. Although Gutman admits that forced separation by sale was frequent，he shows that the slavespreference，revealed most clearly on plantations where sale was infrequent，was very much for stable monogamy. （3+） 　　難句類型：插入語 　　譯文：雖然古特曼承認，由于奴隸買賣而造成的被迫離散甚為頻繁，但他還是證明，奴隸的偏愛在那些奴隸買賣并不頻繁的種植園上被最為顯著地揭示出來在很大程度上側重于穩定的一夫一妻制（monogamy）。解釋：本句中插入語的使用revealed most clearly on plantations where sale wa infrequent, 后半個分句中的主語that slaves preference與系動詞was離得太遠，造成閱讀的困難。 　　意群訓練：Although Gutman admits that forced separation by sale was frequent，he shows that the slaves preference，revealed most clearly on plantations where sale was infrequent，was very much for stable monogamy. 　　8. Gutman argues convincingly that the stability of the Black family encouraged　the transmission 大of-and so was crucial in sustaining-the Black heritage of folklore，music，and religious expression from one generation to another，a heritage that slaves were continually fashioning out of their African and American experiences. （4） 　　難句類型：復雜修飾、插入語 　　譯文：古特曼人令人信服地論辨道，黑人家庭的穩定有助于包括民間傳說、音樂、及宗教表達在內的黑人文化遺產一代一代傳遞下去，因而在維持文化遺產方面也起著至關重要的作用，而對于這種文化遺產，黑奴們不斷地從其非洲和美洲的經歷中予以豐富發展。 　　解釋：由that引導的賓語從句中，encouraged的賓語the transmission of the Black heritage被同時表示并列和轉折的and so 分開，給讀者造成了閱讀上和理解上的困難。最后一個逗號后面的部分是修飾前面的black heritage的同位語。 　　意群訓練：Gutman argues convincingly that the stability of the Black family encouraged　the transmission of-and so was crucial in sustaining-the Black heritage of folklore，music，and religious expression from one generation to another，a heritage that slaves were continually fashioning out

　　7. Although Gutman admits that forced separation by sale was frequent，he shows that the slavespreference，revealed most clearly on plantations where sale was infrequent，was very much for stable monogamy. （3+） 　　難句類型：插入語 　　譯文：雖然古特曼承認，由于奴隸買賣而造成的被迫離散甚為頻繁，但他還是證明，奴隸的偏愛在那些奴隸買賣并不頻繁的種植園上被最為顯著地揭示出來在很大程度上側重于穩定的一夫一妻制（monogamy）。解釋：本句中插入語的使用revealed most clearly on plantations where sale wa infrequent, 后半個分句中的主語that slaves preference與系動詞was離得太遠，造成閱讀的困難。 　　意群訓練：Although Gutman admits that forced separation by sale was frequent，he shows that the slaves preference，revealed most clearly on plantations where sale was infrequent，was very much for stable monogamy. 　　8. Gutman argues convincingly that the stability of the Black family encouraged　the transmission 大of-and so was crucial in sustaining-the Black heritage of folklore，music，and religious expression from one generation to another，a heritage that slaves were continually fashioning out of their African and American experiences. （4） 　　難句類型：復雜修飾、插入語 　　譯文：古特曼人令人信服地論辨道，黑人家庭的穩定有助于包括民間傳說、音樂、及宗教表達在內的黑人文化遺產一代一代傳遞下去，因而在維持文化遺產方面也起著至關重要的作用，而對于這種文化遺產，黑奴們不斷地從其非洲和美洲的經歷中予以豐富發展。 　　解釋：由that引導的賓語從句中，encouraged的賓語the transmission of the Black heritage被同時表示并列和轉折的and so 分開，給讀者造成了閱讀上和理解上的困難。最后一個逗號后面的部分是修飾前面的black heritage的同位語。 　　意群訓練：Gutman argues convincingly that the stability of the Black family encouraged　the transmission of-and so was crucial in sustaining-the Black heritage of folklore，music，and religious expression from one generation to another，a heritage that slaves were continually fashioning out